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I thought this was an interesting package that I found on CNN video. It is about a woman who was suffering from severe stomach problems and doctors couldn't find what was causing it. The hook to the story was that she diagnosed herself in her high school science class,

I thought it was a good package it has a good CCC plenty of nat sound and nat pops. It had good quotes and good visuals to help tell the story. The only thing I could see wrong with it was, the twist was not revealed as dramatically as it could have been. It almost seemed nonchalant the way she discovered her own sickness. The package also ran a little long but other than that it was a very interesting story.

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